Deadlock Positive elements of product: -Use of editing and colour is effective at the start of product as it introduces the character and creates an enigma as he is in a fairly dark, mysterious setting. It also provides a sense of time and shows that the character is having a flashback -Sound used is very clear and easy for the audience to understand -Transitions between scenes is effective as it illustrates the story to the audience in an interesting way -Costumes and props are effective -The titles relate to the genre of the product and look professional
Areas for improvement: -The storyline is a bit vague, and the audience don’t really understand what is actually going on- how do the different scenes relate to one another?
-in the institutions there could have been another referral to the zombies between the first and third. -the zoom towards the barbed wire could have been slower
-lighting is good, emphasizes the tense atmosphere -costume goes well with genre -continuity is good
Positive: *Good use of sound and lighting to create tensions and spooky feeling. *Rocky music fits well with the theme along with music at the start to create the perfect enigma. *Close ups help the audience to see who the main character is as well as a very good use of props. *Flash backs help interest the audience along with good use of contrasting colours. *News clips fit in well with theme along with mystery being created with the scientist clips. *The way clips are used in between the Universal logo help create enigma and help the audience see that the film is zombie themed.
Improvements: *Shaky camera movements help with enigma however in some parts the camera movements could be more steady. *Voice over needs to be more clear *The change in actors is slightly confusing along with the all the different characters in the opening without introduction. *The frame at 0:27 is slightly to bright for a zombie themed film.
Pros- We felt the group had a good understanding of the genre; theintegrated zombie clips whilst the opening was playing showed this.- The music used highlighted the tension and made the audience feelapprehensive.- The lighting used is really effective when highlighting the main character.- The shooting scenes of the zombies were very realistic which madethe film more believable. CONS =- When the main character is on the telephone the conversation ismuffled and hard to hear.
We really like the camera movement when it is from her point of view, and she is falling on the floor. However, the next couple of shots, when she is on the floor, and he helps up, seems to be a bit slow and needs a faster edit because it will have more continuity. Except for this, we really like the opening and how you have ended it with the shot of the boy walking of, and the girl’s reaction.
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ReplyDeletePositive elements of product:
-Use of editing and colour is effective at the start of product as it introduces the character and creates an enigma as he is in a fairly dark, mysterious setting. It also provides a sense of time and shows that the character is having a flashback
-Sound used is very clear and easy for the audience to understand
-Transitions between scenes is effective as it illustrates the story to the audience in an interesting way
-Costumes and props are effective
-The titles relate to the genre of the product and look professional
Areas for improvement:
-The storyline is a bit vague, and the audience don’t really understand what is actually going on- how do the different scenes relate to one another?
-in the institutions there could have been another referral to the zombies between the first and third.
ReplyDelete-the zoom towards the barbed wire could have been slower
-lighting is good, emphasizes the tense atmosphere
-costume goes well with genre
-continuity is good
Positive:
ReplyDelete*Good use of sound and lighting to create tensions and spooky feeling.
*Rocky music fits well with the theme along with music at the start to create the perfect enigma.
*Close ups help the audience to see who the main character is as well as a very good use of props.
*Flash backs help interest the audience along with good use of contrasting colours.
*News clips fit in well with theme along with mystery being created with the scientist clips.
*The way clips are used in between the Universal logo help create enigma and help the audience see that the film is zombie themed.
Improvements:
*Shaky camera movements help with enigma however in some parts the camera movements could be more steady.
*Voice over needs to be more clear
*The change in actors is slightly confusing along with the all the different characters in the opening without introduction.
*The frame at 0:27 is slightly to bright for a zombie themed film.
Pros- We felt the group had a good understanding of the genre; theintegrated zombie clips whilst the opening was playing showed this.- The music used highlighted the tension and made the audience feelapprehensive.- The lighting used is really effective when highlighting the main character.- The shooting scenes of the zombies were very realistic which madethe film more believable.
ReplyDeleteCONS =- When the main character is on the telephone the conversation ismuffled and hard to hear.
We really like the camera movement when it is from her point of view, and she is falling on the floor. However, the next couple of shots, when she is on the floor, and he helps up, seems to be a bit slow and needs a faster edit because it will have more continuity. Except for this, we really like the opening and how you have ended it with the shot of the boy walking of, and the girl’s reaction.
ReplyDelete